Week 5- session 2

Group Critique- Interim two

We discussed our printed out copies of our developed posters that were refined from the previous week. I found that maybe the imagery needed some editing as the larger scale caused me to be able to see some errors better. It was helpful to get feedback on what I developed my poster into and see whether people could get the idea. Also, I found that I also needed to work a lot on my type choice and the ledding and kerning as it did not suit my concept that well. The feedback will help to advance my project as I now know what I should work on to hopefully make my poster clearer and easier to read.

It was also interesting to see the works of students in spatial design as although their project was completely different they still incorporated ihi and wehi in an interesting way. I learnt that ihi and wehi are not limited to just being able to persuade people as we can express it in different ways. This also helps to adavance my project because I have a better understanding of ihi and wehi.